Evaluation

Evaluation 

I really enjoyed the topic of this term as i have studied the book before in english but this time i got to put all my effort and thought into a performance. 

I think the performance went really well all round and everyone worked together as a team. Once we all got into character and focused The show flowed together easily. I think everyone was nervous at the start but it was much easier once we had done it to the other class. 

Things we did well

-I think we got into character easily and put aside our actual thoughts and feelings and focused on our characters 

-throughout the performance I reacted to what jake was saying, this helps because it makes the performance look real and it shows understanding if you are reacting. It also makes it flow because if you were talking in a conversation you wouldn't stop and stutter. 

- I think me and Jake both interacted with the audience and also acknowledged them by looking at them and revealing our emotions in the way we speak. 

Things we could of improved 

- i think we could of improved how quick and slow we were talking because sometimes i felt as if we were slowing down to much also also  were to many  pauses which can slow down the scene and create awkwardness. 
- In some part we were quiet and we could of prejected our voices further such as when jake is talking about what he wishes he could do and when im confessing 'i wish i was bonkers' by doing this we would of created an effect of passion.